His slides went too fast and where a bit hard to read at times because there was too much text. Otherwise the pictures where good quality and had a good message.
Some of the pictures where blurry and the text was hard to read because there was only a couple of words on each slide. There was also a spelling mistake and it was hard to keep interested.
His could have had a better use of words but otherwise a good clip.
I got a little lost half way through but the pictures and message was good.
Some of the pictures where blurry and the music was not well synced with the pictures.
Seemed more about the game rather than the message but otherwise a good clip with good pictures.
Had text over text at times and some spelling mistakes. But otherwise good.
A very good clip but with only one spelling mistake.
Too fast but otherwise a good clip with good pictures.
Text could flow better but otherwise good.
A clear message and a very good clip.