Andrew
Some of the pictures where blurry and the text was hard to read because there was only a couple of words on each slide. There was also a spelling mistake and it was hard to keep interested.

David
His could have had a better use of words but otherwise a good clip.

Erin
I got a little lost half way through but the pictures and message was good.

Joe
Some of the pictures where blurry and the music was not well synced with the pictures.

Kyle
Seemed more about the game rather than the message but otherwise a good clip with good pictures.

Lachlan
Had text over text at times and some spelling mistakes. But otherwise good.

Laura
A very good clip but with only one spelling mistake.

Morgan
All good.

Nick
Too fast but otherwise a good clip with good pictures.

Quentin
Text could flow better but otherwise good.

Belinda   

A clear message and a very good clip.